It crackles like static, this love --
damaged, like vinyl records
attracting dust that sleeps inside grooves,
falling deeper into slumber
as the stylus passes over
and over
scratching, so I can’t settle
into the paralysed wind
and I’m waiting,
like an old set of speakers
on the wall, declining all requests
to overflow the room with it’s hums
until you un-press mute
and isn’t it funny
how I still sit at work, after all this time
and open stubborn carrier bags
on my checkout, charging the thin metal strip
of conveyer belt edges
to untouchable --
until a slip of a finger
brings another shock
and I blame you
for having such numb hands
that cannot peel the plastic apart.
















Comments
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This is your punishment.
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The standards of justice of this world, decided against driving ambitions and turbulent emotions of a small handful of people
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...oO Nihongo de nan to iimasu ka? Oo...
clubs:
:KyoDream:
:degclub:
:kyo-love:
:miyavirocks:
AM I WRONG AND STUPID??
Luckily it is still beautiful, though takes a bit to ponder.
*tiptoes*
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I hear
your voice
down the hall, through the window, above
all those trees, a light
it seems
& you are singing. What song
is that The words
are beautiful.
-LeRoi Jones
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acid goes to your head;
ecstasy goes to your heart
Peace&Love
yup
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x
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~*~And so again I fix the damage of another
broken heart.~*~
great read as always.
enjoyed.
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*cheers..
I recommend you change "damaged, like vinyl records" to simply "like a vinyl record." "Damaged" is superfluous, and I think the specificity of a record makes the image stronger.
Line 12: “Its” shouldn’t have an apostrophe in this context.
~M
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