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the place we find ourselves by ~inmyroom:iconinmyroom:



We ran between tree trunks,
slotting ourselves perfectly into each other
's flaws. I had shoulders the crunched
when I was touched, you had freckles
that caused droughts
in my throat.

I dog-licked my veins
back into cool waters
and away from your revolving doors;
lawn mowers whirled there, making a fresh may
out of grassroots and vapid love,
they unpeeled our hands to unearth
those dead cells won't let go.

But sometimes we don't talk for days,
we lay in dirt like dead birds
until the gravel shifts us back together.

It should not be this way.
©2007-2009 ~inmyroom
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:iconroxyangel22:
Very inspiring and heartfelt! :) *fave*

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie
:iconqueenhrosie:
i love you for the dead birds.

i hope you are well.

*nods*

--
I hear
your voice
down the hall, through the window, above
all those trees, a light
it seems
& you are singing. What song
is that The words
are beautiful.

-LeRoi Jones
:iconh0ar:
I love how I feel like I can relate to parts of your work (though I understand this is your work, and your thoughts). The way you weave words together, and seem to explore many different sides of them, as well as many different sides of feelings, objects, situations, and so on, amazes me. Thank you again :) .

--
Breathe...
:iconkrisanthemum:
"slotting ourselves perfectly into each other's flaws", i love that line. your poems have a certain flow to them, unique to you, they seem almost dream-like but at the same time seem to be some of the most honest, real things ive read.
:iconinmyroom:
thank you very much =)
:iconinmyroom:
i am well thank you, i hope you are too? i've been reading your poetry but i don't really have much to say apart from 'wow'! xxxx
:iconinmyroom:
thank you, it makes me :D that you enjoy my ramblings.
:iconinmyroom:
thank you, i've been reading some of my old stuff and some of it really doesnt flow too much, so i've been trying to work on it and balance things out so it reads smoothly.. heh.
:icondrowningbywords:
startling and disturbing imagery
a riveting and interesting read =)
:heart:

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Music Is True Love:love:You have never been in love/Until you've seen the stars/Reflect in the reservoirs:love:Book Lovers Of The World Unite!

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