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I witnessed seven people fall in love
with high blood pressure, it lead to a time bomb,
to falling down with your eyes
open, focused on a landing spot.

This is where helicopters are set alight, you did not understand
they twist into limp muscle and smile at the large X,
I have important things to tell you

like I could swallow bullets like H2O, or get fucked up
in nightclubs, I could inhale a whole birthday cake,
spit it out with violence and hate
or run down country roads at 2am, screaming, wearing only
black hot pants.  

I have secrets to share, choices to make
under covers, behind books, below pavement slabs,
or I could hold raspberries to my wrists
and pretend I am brave.
©2006-2009 ~inmyroom
:iconinmyroom:

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:iconburnaway:
i love this.

I have secrets to share, choices to make
under covers, behind books, below pavement slabs,
or I could hold raspberries to my wrists
and pretend I am brave.


it is my favorite thing you have ever written.
:icongeek-stink-breath:
i love the simplicity in this.
:iconjaggedtears:
or I could hold raspberries to my wrists
and pretend I am brave.

i really love this.
it is so pretty

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you came to me like an angel out of time...and i played the part of a saint on my knees
:iconroxyangel22:
Amazing! The whole piece is just absolutly amazing and the end is very well job indeed! great Work!

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie
:iconfrenetic-harlequin:
this is simply amzing.

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Infatuated Then Frustrated :orange:
:iconevenbecause:
It's interesting.
I have not witnessed this depth of poetry for a while
(meaning I must get used to reading your works again!)
and so this really took me back
and I loved it.
Espescially the beginning and the end.

Bravo!


*applauds*

--
"They call me a poet,
I wonder what they would say if
they saw me
from the inside?" -Saul Williams


~Jenn
:iconmiss-hart:
i love the way you write, and maybe it's just me, but this one doesn't seem to have the intense involvement the others do. however, it is still extremely well written, as i assume you already know.

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when i [s][p][e][a][k] i c/r/o/s/s my fingers
:iconshootanemo:
lovely :heart:

"I have secrets to share, choices to make
under covers, behind books, below pavement slabs,
or I could hold raspberries to my wrists
and pretend I am brave. "

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:heart: lomo + ~indonesia
:icontigerlilytori:
I love the line

"run down country roads at 2am, screaming, wearing only
black hot pants. "

I have done this, but with more clothes I may add hehe
I love the imagery in this, as with all your work

--
Are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

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