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love looks better on paper by ~inmyroom:iconinmyroom:





I hung my eyelids until they rusted
on iron hooks, I can hear God
lick the blood, He glued angels to my soles
and set me on my way.

You read my corneas
three hundred and twenty seven times, I can feel you
peel back decay and hold a glowstick to my skull
when I really need headlights and five vowls
to split tree trunks in half.

We walk miles between telephone cables,
hold you lip lines upto my pores, tell my tendons something
new, tell it with your pulse-sighs, with your wrist bones

with your knee caps that can open doors. I'll cough it up hard
for you, then swim inside your ear canal to remind you
your mother loves you,
she knows the edges of your body are beautiful,
atoms fall away and I can see you
hand me an atomony book
and say I have a lot to learn.

I can feel the defect in my stomach,
the cancer in my airways
but I open my arteries forgiveness-wide,
some days I am older than you
but that's okay

because most days I am not
and I fit inside match boxes again.
Let's pretend we live inside barcodes
and own numbers instead of names,
just for a while. Then we can go back
to scrape the marrow from our bones
until we reach the 'us' we like.

We must have been busy pulling our pistol skins apart
when God told us to love ourselves
before he mailed us to this place
where people box up heart beats
like stamps.
©2006-2009 ~inmyroom
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:iconlazybutt:
The fourth stanza is really nice. I enjoyed this piece. Nice work. :)

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:icondeadlines:
Wow!

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Egocentric? Oh rly?
:iconsoozey:
i think this poem is absolutely amazing!!! i'd swear if i didn't want to offend people!!!

FAVE

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we learn through pain until we evolve to learn through joy
:icondaiichi:
This is one of the most clever poems I've read in a while :) Love your word use!

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False hopes are only false, if you haven't taken a second to measure a task, if you have, and you can still have faith in yourself to do a good job, then there's no reason you shouldn't be confident
:iconpetronivs:
When I saw the title, I said to myself, "Everything's better in an elevator."
:iconimperfectthoughts:
*crys* beautiful.

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Emotional Evan

Toking the way home.
:iconnyasa:
Very nice, I particularly love the intro and think the closing is strong

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"An ounce of perception, a pound of obscure" -- Rush
One cannot run a country like one runs a business.
:icondviperman:
Very nice, Excellent work.

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Im untouchable, but I am forcing you to feel me.
..And that's The Bottom Line, Cuz I F*cking Said So!
:iconhaunting-eternity:
Wow... everytime I read something that you write, I'm just in awe. It's always just raw and out there and beautiful and amazing in it's own way. I always wish that, some day, I'll be able to write and effect people like you do. =)
:iconsleeplessjewel:
i think the last stanza could stand on its own. its far more.. graceful than the rest of the poem.

i like your imagery but sometimes theres so much going on... its hard for a succinct image to be formed.

:) but hey, maybe u werent after that!!

as usual wonderful manipulation of the language :)

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