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ground floor poem by *inmyroom:iconinmyroom:





You cut yourself out of cereal boxes, press against guitar strings
that rip your fingertips open - exposed, you choke
on E minors, you cough up plectrums
and words that sound like 'sorry'.

I do not know you well, but I do know you are kind
and inside something pulls on wire, there is something soft
trapped in cogs, new bedsheets or maybe
it's your heart. I bet he said he didn't mean to
make your eyelashes clump together
and your skin feel like a tambourine. Clay is --
a substance that gets harder under intense heat,

         this is not an example of chemical weather, just kiln hands
         and a girl with silt burnt into her cuticles because too much electric
         is trapped, it slams against lazy organs and slips through tubes
         under-flesh.


Your elbows remind me of tea cups,
something boils between china lips
and the edge of your eyelids no longer look like horizon lines,
but a pink saucer crashing against bedroom walls --

they taste salt-splashed, today. Digging into cement
you want to rest there, like dust. There is not much air to filter
anymore.
©2006-2009 *inmyroom
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Submitted: January 26, 2006
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I've had a lot of time the past few days, been making the most of it before lectures start again on monday :p

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LOVE it.

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I'm alright in bed, but I'm better with a pen.
i absolutely love this piece.
i think the imagery is well grasped.
it is original.
love the flow.
awesome!!!!

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***i am curved like a scythe***
You are such a great writer. I love the imagery in this one. :+fav:.
omg it sounds like me :XD: :heart:

i love how you put together the first stanza :clap:

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zombie trousers
It's amazing sweety; should I be concerned about the title?!

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Don't dream it; be it
lol, no. why does it concern you?
I live on teh ground floor!

But no, I love the poem; it's worth all the time you spent not playing with me :)

Love fuss

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Don't dream it; be it
haha, it just popped in my head and kinda stuck. :)

:heart:
I like it x

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Don't dream it; be it
I like the part "words that sound like 'sorry'."
And I adore the part "I bet he said he didn't mean to
make your eyelashes clump together
and your skin feel like a tambourine. Clay is --
a substance that gets harder under intense heat"
There's a typo in the second paragraph. It says 'betsheets' and it should say 'bedsheets'.

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"I dreamed of being part of the stories- even terrifying ones, even horror stories- because at least the girls in stories were alive before they died." -Francesca Lia Block

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